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I hate the way you make me feel,
I hate the way you look at her.

I love the way you hug me,
I love the way you smile.

I love the way you play me,
It keeps me on my toes.

I hate the way you toss me aside,
Stranded on my own.

I love the way your warmth surrounds me,
It makes me feel protected.

I love the way you laugh,
A sound of golden silk.

I hate the way you're so arrogant,
The way you are so self confident.

But I also -

Love the way you make me feel,
It shows that I'm alive.

Hate the way you hug me,
It makes me want you more.

Hate the way you smile,
It draws me in.

Hate the way you play me,
Keeping me caged.

Love the way you toss me aside,
Showing me what the world is like.

Hate the way your warmth surrounds me,
Makes me realize I'm no longer yours.

Hate the way you laugh,
It's always in my head.

Love the way you're arrogant,
Showing you're confident in who you are.

It's crazy,
I've checked.
It shows I hate you more than I love you.

But I know, even with everything I hate,
I'll always love you more.

23 February 2012
Haha, this is about a stupid arrogant son-of-a-bitch who thinks he can have whatever he wants. Well, with his women.

But, I don't care. He's a good friend, miss him, and he's more important to me than he realizes.

Britt, I know you hate him and you tell me to get over him, and I've said before, it's hard. Though I'm getting through it and it's coming along pretty damn good as of far.

Let's hope his girlfriend keeps him occupied so he doesn't see me slip away, right? Cause if he does, my ass will just get dragged back.

Alright! Ignore that up there. I really hope you guys like this.
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Izaya-Orihara-Chan Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Get over that bitch. He is trash and no one cares for him.
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sakura-chan82 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
;b I am. I have someone so much better that treats me like I should be treated. I could care less about that ass hole anymore.
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xXXxWolfie-FiendXxxX Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
In Line 9 and Line 26, the you're should be your. Read the way to have it written, it would be "I love the way you are warmth surrounds me," and "Hate the way you are warmth surrounds me,".

Other then that, it's a good poem. I like it.
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sakura-chan82 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry. . . But thanks. I didn't notice it.
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xXXxWolfie-FiendXxxX Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. I've done the same so no biggie :)
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sakura-chan82 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
;]
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sadd-emo Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist
wow. i like this alot.
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